Wednesday, June 9, 2010

about movie (Phoebe Chang)

When a new movie coming, of course the movie that I am interested in, I always think about: do I need to get a DVD or go to a theatre? Actually most of people thought about this question before. And also depend on who you are going with, and what kind of movie do you choose.
I always like to watch documentary film or comedy at home with my friends. because I think it have more fun. I can eat whatever I want and I can stop the movie when I go to washroom. It makes me feel relaxing. If I go to a theatre, It must be a action or science fiction movie, because I want to feel an ambience of movie.

3 comments:

  1. Phoebe, this is quite a good start, but I think when I read it I feel that it isn't finished. I think you could look at the organization of the paragraph, and so some more brainstorming, so that you can give two reasons why it is better to watch a movie at home, and then two reasons why it is better to watch a movie in the theatre, and you can give support for all the reasons based on your own experiences and opinions. You also need a concluding sentence. I think you could develop this into an interesting piece of writing if you work more on the support and the organization. (Eilidh)

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  2. Hi,Phoebe.I am Vanessa.I am crazy about movie too.I believe both of them have pros and cons.For example,you can enjoy excellent sight and hearing effects at a theatre. In my opinion, if they cut down the movie tickets, I will often go to cinema. What about you? Maybe you can give us more reasons about the advantages of seeing movie at home.(Vanessa)

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  3. I like movies, could you introduce some interesting movies to me. I mean science fiction film or comedy.(Jordan)

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