Two of my friends, Xin and Yan, have the similar personalities while have big differences. We feel interesting about their similarities, but also feel surprising about their definite diversities.
They are both outgoing and short-tempered. Even though they are best friends, they have the most contradictions comparing with getting along with us. Doing the exciting things are their hobbies because they are active and can not stop playing anytime. They do not want to be controlled and do the things that attract them by following their hearts. Moreover, Xin dose not only have the short temper, but is also modest. She sustains her own opinion meanwhile she accepts other people’s suggestion. However, Yan is more willful because she only depends on her own viewpoints without anybody’s advice.
My two friends are the smart ladies and the great debaters. They are good at arguing when they try to obtain their rights. Of course, there is a difference between their arguments. Yan is a clever business man; she operates a shop selling cell phones that can make her be stronger because of her quick reaction. She persuades the people by using the intense arguments to buy her products. But Xin always argues with the person who is the leader of her company. She often feels unfair when her leader does something. That is the reason why she has quitted from five companies. In my opinion, they are so self-confident that they are not afraid of all the difficulties. They will defeat what they do not agree with.
Xin is sensitive, but Yan is more realistic. On one hand, they both love making friends, while Yan will consider that which type of friends she should get along with. However, Xin doesn’t care about these things, she just dose what she loves to do whatever how awful the situation is. On the other hand, Yan prefers to spend more time on staying with her families. On contrast, Xin would like to travel everywhere if she has time. She has travelled to Tibet lonely, but Yan does not have the brief. So Xin is more independent than Yan.
To conclude, they are both deeply impressive people because of their bright characters. But none of person could be same, they are individual.
I enjoyed reading about your two friends. You have some good examples to support your ideas. Keep working on organising your ideas so that each paragraph is about one idea- you have lots of ideas in the third paragraph and I think that could be divided into two paragraphs. I like the illustration- it shows exactly the topic you are discussing, which is two things that can look alike, but which have some distinct differences. (Eilidh)
ReplyDeleteyah you are right Bonnie about that none of person could be same. I strongly agree with that each of person should be uniqe.
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