When I saw this composition title,a lot of memories flowed. But just one thing let me feel it just like happened on yesterday. That is when I was little,I was a naughty boy. I had used to climb the tree or grasp firefly in my hometown. I’m good at having fun. So actually I had a happy childhood, but sometimes we not aware of the danger.One day, my friends bought a new refrigerator. The outer package for the refrigerator has so many polyfoam. Then I suddenly had an idea, I thought the “polyfoam boat” maybe had enough buoyancy to support us. So I wanted to make a boat by polyfoam, because the stream is near where I lived, I can took a trip with my friends by boat. After what I think, I decided to make my boat. When we finished it, I just leave a letter for my parents, I say“Don't worry about me, the stream will make my dreams come true”. I was so naive, isn't it? My best friend decided to come with me, so we went to stream together. Before We tested the boat for its buoyancy. “Will!Will ~!!”just then a familiar voice came from very far away. Who is calling my name? I turned around I saw my mother was crying and running to us. “Why she was crying?” I got another question! I thought maybe she read my letter and proud of me. Before I wanted to talk to her, “Do you know how dangerous you did that!? How can you have this crazy idea “My mom said? My mom took us to homes so we needed to stop our plan, the journey ends in this way.
After I arrived home, I have no idea why my mom did this. While I’m growing, now I finally know what dangerous thing I did. Did you also have anything happened like me in your childhood?
Wednesday, June 9, 2010
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Will, this is a good story! I am sure that your mother must have been really worried when she read your note, and I am glad that she managed to stop you, even though I am sure at the time that you were not happy that your adventure on your 'boat' was stopped!
ReplyDeleteKeep working on accuracy with verb tenses. Don't forget to comment on two other blog posts by Monday :-)(Eilidh)
Hi will, your story make you an interesting person. I never did like you. I am so enjoy reading. take care of your self please.(Samar)
ReplyDeletehi will! I like your saying goes that your didnt know why your mother worry and you kept asking yourself this question.That perfectly illustrate your minds at that time. Have fun on weekend!(Bonnie)
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