Sometimes you need to talk to someone, who can listen to you, but everyone is busy with their lives. I believe that it is better to talk with your pen than to talk with people because people have limit to listen to you. However, writing is the best way to improve your knowledge, run your brain and express your feeling.
Everyone wants to be a good writer. However, if you read a lot, you will improve your writing and your knowledge. When you start thinking and using your back ground knowledge, you encouraging your brain. Even thought, you are writing by your first language or English.
Writing makes space for people to express their feeling and give them free dame to explain their opinion. On other hand, some people enjoy to write about their daily lives. I think writing is important for everyone to communicate such as people who can’t spoke. I enjoy writing my daily life to remind me every moment in my life. Now I have to learn writing by English language to achieve my goal. Writing is amazing way to talk about every thing without voice.
Samar, thank you for sharing your ideas about how important writing is for you. I liked the way you said that 'it is better to talk with your pen'- this is a good description! Keep working on the use of transitional words and their meanings. Good picture!(Eilidh)
ReplyDeleteI am sure abou that you will achive your gole very soon, and really I like your description which is took me to read your juornal to the end.
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Hi Samar I feel glad that you enjoy writing. I believe that you can improve your english from your writing. (Thanisa)
ReplyDeleteHi Samar, actually that's a good paragraph. After read your eassy I feel more confidence in writing.
ReplyDeleteI hope that I can use the amazing way to talk about every thing without voice well. (kenny)
Hi samar, it was great. When I finished read your eaasy, I want to rent some English to read. Thank you to remind me, reading is a great thing.(Will)
ReplyDeleteHi,Samar. I am really agree with you. writing is good way to learn language and so on. it is really good to write journal every day. (Phoebe)
ReplyDeleteSorry I can not see your topic sentence body paragraphs concluding sentence, it looks like a diary. (Wenan)
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