Tuesday, May 18, 2010

I Will (Bonnie)

My partner Will is a boy who believes in the hope and the future. Will has an experience studying in Sydney, which was his unforgettable life of high school. The weather in Sydney is so nice that he just needed to wear the T-shirt all year and he loved this city. He likes the comfortable life and He thought his name means the future. In addition, the popular star Will Smith is also his favorite well-known star. He came to Vancouver because he plans to graduate from the famous university, UBC. There he can get a fabulous education in Canada and that is why he chose this city. At the same time, he believes in that graduating from UBC can not merely bring him knowledge, but also help him for doing business in the future years. Therefore, Will will do his best and will always say “I will”.

3 comments:

  1. Think you for your suggestion.Your article is behind of others so that I find it to take a while...... It's very difficult to check your article to find some mistakes.But,I think you may not use "In addition".Because I think this sentence is not connect with before sentence.(elvis li)

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  2. I like the word "fabulous" and it is perfect to wear T-shirt all year. But I think there is something wrong with "help him for doing". Because the usage of help is "help to do" or "cannot help doing". (Vanessa)

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  3. Bonnie, this is a good description of Will. I liked how the title is related to the concluding sentence. I look forward to reading your next post!

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