Tuesday, May 18, 2010
My genius friend, Peter (Kenny)
Peter, who comes from Korea, has cheerful view of his life. Do you know what a genius is? I think Peter is. He is not only good at playing guitar but also good at I-go , which is a kind of game. I have to say that he is among the most intelligent guys I have even seen. There are lots of people that are only good at one thing. Peter is 25 years old. His sister is studying at UBC campus too. His mother was coming with them together. Only his father is working in Korea alone. Another important piece of information which is missing is his girlfriend was an ELI student last semester. During studying in Canada he would like to go to other cities for traveling. I must admit he is a great guy! He is a very friendly guy. He likes animals, especially dogs. He is also a lovely guy. When he see some people are in trouble he always try his best to help them. He said if one day there no troubles in the world that would be wonderful thing.
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I enjoy in your artical and I also knew him before this semester. He is a good guy. However, I think in this sentence (There are lots of people)you should write (There are a lot of people). In my opinon you are a good writer.(Samar)
ReplyDeleteThis is a good artical, and there are some good sentences. But I think the word 'guy' is a informal word, you need use formal words in writing, because this artical should be a formal artical. (Jordan)
ReplyDeleteKenny, this is a good description of Peter. Try to group similar information- for example, experience, education, hobbies, personality. I look forward to your next blog post.
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