Tuesday, May 18, 2010
My Classmate, ABO (Thanisa)
I have a lot of friends who come from many countries. One of them comes from Libya. Here is a little story about him. His name is Abo, and he graduated with a master’s degree from his country ,with a major in statistics. He is interested in chess and poetry. In his freetime, he writes many stories. He has already started a story about love. In this story, he wrote the word “love” more than 1,000 words in many situations. Football is his favorite sport. He played football after finishing class in his university. His favorite place in Vancouver is the Rocky Mountains. Last February, he went to the Rocky Mountains with his friends. He enjoys skiing on these mountains. Now he is studying English at the English Language Institute. He studies English because he wants to improve his English language skills for admission to university in Canada. He lives on the UBC Campus. After finishing this ELI course, he will apply to do a PhD degree in Canada and get married. When he finishes his PhD degree in Vancouver, he wants to be a teacher in university.
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ReplyDeleteactually I thought you will introduce some details about his story which he had begun to write,because in the beginning you said "here is a little story about him". I thought you would tell us a story. Anyway you described him quite clearly and the whole paragraph is full of interest.
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I think you'd better to write your main idea more clearly. actually I do not know the main idea of this paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood job- I enjoyed reading this paragraph, Thanisa. Don't forget that you should have a concluding sentence! I look forward to reading your next post!
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