Tuesday, May 18, 2010
This is My Partner Bonnie (Will)
My partner is Bao Xiaohuan and her English name is Bonnie. She was a university student in China and her major was journalism. She had a part-time job in China so she has some job experience that will help her to find a job in Vancouver easily. She is already planning her future. After she finished the ELI courses, she wants to study in UBC to get Master’s degree in journalism and she wants to work here and make a lot of money because she wants to take care of her parents better because she was awared her parents have spent a lot of money for her studying. She also thinks studying is to make lives more comfortable in the future and money is a very important thing for living well. I agree her point very much because our parents want us to get the best education and want us to have life skills to make us have a good future, so we have responsibility to look after our parents.
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"because she wants to take care of her parents better because she was awared her parents have spent a lot of money for her studying"I think you should not use because twice in a same sentence though it is correct.other thing should be okay. The opinion is clear.(elvis li)
ReplyDeleteyou have lots of information about Bonnie. it's nice. Maybe you can make the paragraph more interesting.(Phoebe)
ReplyDeleteI want to know that how old is she? And what's kind of job did she working in China? (kenny)
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting piece on Bonnie, Will. I enjoyed reading it. Make sure that you always check your work carefully before you post it. I look forward to your next post!
ReplyDeleteThis writing let me know Bonnie clearly. After I saw this, I want to make frient with her. I think you can get more information about her, and try to write more interesting. (Wenan Wu)
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