Tuesday, May 18, 2010

My Partner (Phoebe Chang)

There are many reasons to let a person go abroad. My partner Vanessa has the same reason as me, which is to find our dream job, and we both like school life. However, we also have lots of differences. It’s a good thing to make friends with her. She is a Chinese girl and she is the only child in her family. She has lots of hobbies. She also likes pets. She has a cat called Mimi. She has already finished her University. I hope her dream will come true. That is my partner, who is my friend Vanessa.

2 comments:

  1. It is interesting story ,but you should explain about her hobbies
    (Thanisa)

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  2. Phoebe, I liked reading about Vanessa. I wonder if you could try next time to join sentences together, like we practiced in class. This will add variety to your writing. I am looking forward to reading your next post!

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