My name is Li Yanhan. My English name is Elvis. Today I am glad to hae a conversation with my new friend who is from Korea. His Korean name is a little difficult to get the correct pronunciation in English, so I called him Peter. He lives in Seoul, the capital of Korea,Where he grew up. There are four members in his family. He loves his sister and respects his parents very much, because he thinks the family is the most important part of his life. I agree with his opinion. I think Peter is a grea language commander. He can speak chinese very well. He is almost anative speaker. The reason why he is good at Chinese is that his major is business in China.He came to Canada to study English. He wants to practice speaking and listening to improve his english skills. He need to be an advanced speaker to achieve his purpose. He is a very kind person. He thinks people should get peace for each other all over the world, and he considers the freedom which si a kind of basic rate is an important thing for him.
I am very happy to meet him and honored to make friends with him.
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the article mentioned a topic sentence that he is a great language commander and it also gave some supporting points. Thus the paragraph is very clear. But in my opinion, you should put the topic sentence at the beginning of the article.
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This is a good description, Yanhan. I could feel that you were impressed with Peter's language skills. I wonder if you asked yourself how he became such a good linguist? this is the question I asked myself!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next post.