Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Phoebe, You Can Do It (Vanessa)




My partner Phoebe, who comes from China, is a quiet, sensitive and talented girl. She is good at drawing. She has already studied painting for many years. Therefore, she always prefers staying at home and drawing pictures instead of hanging out with friends in her leisure time. When she is drawing, she is enjoying herself. Drawing is beneficial for her to cultivate her temperament, as it relaxes her, releases her stress and makes her calm. She also spends her spare time watching movies and improving computer skills. At the same time, she is interested in Psychology. She is planning to get a bachelor’s degree of science in Canada. Her sensitivity and thoroughness in character contribute to her doing well in her studies. Now, she lives in Vancouver alone and she is far away from her home and family. When she feels lonely, drawing is often her company. She has to be independent and take good care of herself. It is really an invaluable experience for her to go abroad for education. With her hard work, Phoebe will be successful in getting a bachelor's degree.

3 comments:

  1. I realy enjoy when I read it. However, Phoebe and I have same point. I think this enough for me to know Phoebe. I am so glad to read your artical.(Samar)

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  2. Vanessa, well done for writing an interesting, well-constructed paragraph about Phoebe. I felt that I learned something about her, because you have provided good support. I look forward to your next post!

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  3. It's great!Through your essay let me know some more about this classmate! And your essay is reading very easily and it's a nice picture.(Will)

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